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| TheAngelofhope 2005-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis was very good hope you keep it up. |
| sweetxinsincerity 2005-03-16 ch 1, | abusei luv it!! i like running a lot so obviously i like this poem...lol and the descriptions are very accurate. it's nice how you have the very short lines, sort of as if you are taking short breaths as you run...great job!! |