Eek! I like the "Shotgun in hand/machete in fist" bit best. Good job.

It's dark, but making it rhyme makes it more of dark humor. I like it though. Well written.-SAT

that is awesome.. yeah.. wow. i dont even know what to say. awesome job

I liked the repeated "End End End", at the.. well.. end! (Ha, what a funny girl I am *dies*), but, it was a very-well-written piece. I take it about suicide, yet, interpert it as you will! Nonetheless, it was very good.

-Lavvy

great peice, i really like it a lot, keep up the good work thank you for sharing and thank you for the review

That was awsome..I wish it was longer though.

Nice poem. I love the morbidness its made with. Great poem. Keep it up!

maybe overkill could be a simple word.. but maybe some would say this was a more "forgiving" way to go...

Well done, truly