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| Angel of the sea 2005-03-29 ch 1,   | wow, ur on a roll aren't ya? great job! you've been doing great! ~AOTS |
| dustytiger 2005-03-16 ch 1, | i very much relate, and know many ppl will, such a simple yet wonderful peice, thank you for sharing |
| Shinyfighter 2005-03-16 ch 1, | I really enjoyed reading the third section of this poem since it projects the hopelessness that is the theme of the poem. Nice repetition for the nice satisfying ending. Good work. |