this was great!keep it up!

::sigh:: something a lot of ppl dont do act like themselves... nice job.. thanks for the review

very short, but in those few lines, you managed to hit a clear point, when you wake up and look for who you are.

hahaha ur funny...so SHORT but yet so much meaning in itself...nice poem )

Peaceful somehow, but sad, for is suggest you are not yourself anymore...Nice, I like it alot.

interrestin...very original and short.

this is good. i like how simple but meaningful it is.

hey, nice haiku. tho i must say, im not too much of a haiku fan cause you dont get too deep into things or much of an idea, u just get the just of it. which can be great. just my personal preference. great haiku tho, and thanls for reviewing me and adding me to favs. was much appriciated and sorry it took so long to review back. super busy, lol

I like this. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy

well that was interesting

Not a traditional haiku but still interesting. This sounds like it is part of a longer poem, whether this be the beginning, ending, refrain, or simply a part in passing. The concept could wield many things.

htis sinteritgn but doenst scan as haiku it is kind of deep hpwever well done keep on wrting my son

Um... it doesn't really say much, and it's not really a traditional haiku...they go 5 sylables, 7 sylables, 5 sylables. Just a tip.