aw
this is rather sad

Great structure to this one. I like that 'awkward silence' line too, like one of the other reviewers mentioned. If I could give you any CC, it's for the line "And say its nice, that were alright, when I was never fine." This is just sp's though. "its" oughta be "it's", and "were" should be "we're". At least I think these changes are in order.

It's harder to tell in songs, since grammer doesn't really have a purpose in songwriting. So if I misunderstood the line, then ignore my suggestions. :P

Good stuff as usual.

I love this line 'When did awkward silence become the norm?' its jst gr8 lol... anyways i think its really good, very emotional and i think it involves the reader, cos everybody goes throujgh tht when they break upkeep writin

This one is really sweet. Its probably one of my favorites out of your work, it has a great feel too it as well.

This is a great song. I wasn't sure if you and this person had broken up. But I get that vibe from this song. I really like the line "I miss the days when you and I… We had a shot And I think it’s gone.

Keep up with the wonderful writing!