Beautiful. Wow, you were eleven? I wasn't even thinking about even attempting at poetry then!

~Unimportant

gorgeous... i don't even know what to say... it's beautiful. and yeah, to answer your question, my friend's deaf, so i was up there playing and she couldn't hear any of it...

Wow. I cannot believe you were only eleven when you wrote this! It's lovely, sweet and kind of dark at the same time, which I find really touching. While there are passages that are touching in their simplicity (and this is meant in a positive way, it's so honest and childlike and yet so true what you say), there is also some gorgeous imagery in here, very mature and skilful. I truly am impressed, and I begin to see what you mean that you are rather more mature than your age ...