 gatepost 2005-03-17 . chapter 1aw. how sweet. that's really nice. Although, I feel the last one could be improved upon. I know that there's abetter wor out there than impersonal, I just damn well can't think of it at the moment, it's like cold or sterile or yes, impersonal.And it's a bit repetitive saying i love you again in the third one, is there something different, and just as sweet? That you can think of?Oh well, its really nice anyway, those are just some minor bits you might like to work on.Thanks for that, its really sweet. |