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Dustin Hoffman 2005-05-18 . chapter 1
This gives me the shivers, and I can't quite put my finger on why. But I like it.
Unimportant 2005-03-29 . chapter 1
Very original. Also very touching. Good job!

~Unimportant
gatepost 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
aw. how sweet. that's really nice. Although, I feel the last one could be improved upon. I know that there's abetter wor out there than impersonal, I just damn well can't think of it at the moment, it's like cold or sterile or yes, impersonal.And it's a bit repetitive saying i love you again in the third one, is there something different, and just as sweet? That you can think of?Oh well, its really nice anyway, those are just some minor bits you might like to work on.Thanks for that, its really sweet.
obsidian katana 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
beautiful piece. very sweet, simply expressed. i like this a lot. i love the repetition as well. brings these three pieces together nicely. good work. :)
moxie-original 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
That was lovely, thank you:-))
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