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Unimportant 2005-03-29 . chapter 1
I love this! *sigh* I suppose I'm still in love with the moon and the stars--especially the stars. Is that a bad thing? Does it mark my immaturity and naivety?

~Unimportant

P.S. You were a much better poem writer than I was when I was thirteen (if I did my math right). :)
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 . chapter 1
Beautiful... simply enough said, but I think you captured the night sky perfectly. I am thouroughly obsessed with the night and the "jewels" it posseses. Great piece. Wonderfully written.
myno 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
beautiful poem- you capture all the serenity and mystery of the night sky.
obsidian katana 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
wow...awesome awesome poem. beautifully written, stunning imagery. simply breathtaking. i love the way you ended this, reemphasizing the theme of mystery, as well as beauty. fantastic work. keep it up.
Adonia Chesser 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
This is a nice, calm poem. With a Beauty.
Eirien 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
Truly beautiful. Your imagery is lovely, especially the jewellery inages, and it creates such a rich, mysterious atmsophere. I love the ending "eternal, silent riddles", it poes up the poem to a spiritual dimension, transcends the mere description of beauty. Well done.
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