 Unimportant 2005-03-29 . chapter 1I love this! *sigh* I suppose I'm still in love with the moon and the stars--especially the stars. Is that a bad thing? Does it mark my immaturity and naivety?
~Unimportant
P.S. You were a much better poem writer than I was when I was thirteen (if I did my math right). :) |
 Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 . chapter 1Beautiful... simply enough said, but I think you captured the night sky perfectly. I am thouroughly obsessed with the night and the "jewels" it posseses. Great piece. Wonderfully written. |
 myno 2005-03-17 . chapter 1beautiful poem- you capture all the serenity and mystery of the night sky. |
 obsidian katana 2005-03-17 . chapter 1wow...awesome awesome poem. beautifully written, stunning imagery. simply breathtaking. i love the way you ended this, reemphasizing the theme of mystery, as well as beauty. fantastic work. keep it up. |
 Adonia Chesser 2005-03-17 . chapter 1This is a nice, calm poem. With a Beauty. |
 Eirien 2005-03-17 . chapter 1Truly beautiful. Your imagery is lovely, especially the jewellery inages, and it creates such a rich, mysterious atmsophere. I love the ending "eternal, silent riddles", it poes up the poem to a spiritual dimension, transcends the mere description of beauty. Well done. |