|Reviews for Adaptation|
| Oath 3/17/05 . chapter 1
I don't know who Betsy is butt i felt the poem deserved a review either way. Again, the format is more of one of a story but it seems the structure helps it more than it would hurt it. I LOVED the imagery of a heart waiting to wait out one's tears and somehow i imagine it with its arms crossed, impatiant like. I liked the words you used 'sometimes' 'plonked' and 'amused' gives the poem a while different emotion each line. It gets me thinking on the concept of adaption.