I love the irony to the piece. Very nice touch I'd say. Very well written.

-please feel free to R&R my work.

i like this peice a lot, kind of reminds me of me in high school, tho i'd just say i didn't beleive in best friends, even when i was always around ppl i felt alone, anyway this has that kind of feel to it, and it was great, easy to relate to, great work, keep it up, thank you for sharing

I understand that, those 'hi and bye' type of friend never really fill up the void in us. Good job. Keep it up!

Befriend me?

And the best part of it is that we won't have to worry about hurting the other. It's all fiction in here anyway!

Haha, i liked this...

The page is tyrranical. It never comes out the way it was in your head... UNLESS you "Aim for the chopping block, not the wood"- Annie Dillard