|Reviews for Abysm|
| Nikkoletta St'arah 3/17/05 . chapter 1
I think the only thing off with this was the formatting dragged and the lack of punctuation. There were also a few parts where you repeated yourself a bit. The overall wording was enjoyable, though.
| RonCor 3/17/05 . chapter 1
very very good job, i loved it, its expressed and written very very well, your on my faves, ill be watchin you
| dustytiger 3/17/05 . chapter 1
this is a really greaet peice, i actually feel like i'm running through the whole thing, amazing work, thank you for sharing