This is what I wish I could hear from my mom. Good poem. Every stanza was thought-provoking.

Wow, I can relate well to this poem, very neat. Very nice!

i like it. it's a familiar story, and it was really good up until the end. the whole time thing really through me off. it seems a little out of place, but it could just be me. keep writing!

Awesome emotional output. Loved how everything came back to the main theme. Very pleasurable to read. Good work.

This is really cool... the way you manage to admit that you were wrong and still hold your head up, beg for forgiveness and still keep your pride. The third to last line is a little strange, but you can probably fix that easily. Kudos for posting so many poems (149... my gosh!) cheers

so pretty... it was the right poem at the right time for me... keep writing

Wow, I really identify with this poem! Keep up the good work!

i love this poem, i just wish it were true for me, i never got that second chance, but o well, great job on this one, i love it,

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