wow... this is like a date I went on once! hahahaha... its good

This is such a powerful poem. It flows really well and the rhymes are clever. Going on my faves!

*lime-girl*

I liked this piece...you get kind of a feeling of happiness and nostalgia, looking back n a certain day, then you find out that it's all an act. Very good, and effective.

aw so sad. Again, i like how you write people's actions...very smart of ya but yet so creative. I like it a bunch!

So true...

Heh, it sounds like the Crying Game. And you got Karma Chameleon stuck in my head again...::glare::

Hey, it's better than having Riki's "I wanna violate you" song.

It's not /always/ pretend, though... I wanna be able to rhyme things like you do amber! ::steals rhyming thingy::

hm. the topic is a little over-rated, i think, but i also know that i've used it myself. i like it, if i didn't i wouldn't review it, so nice job. (your screen name, karma chameleon, very snazzy. i will have the song in my head for the next five days. i'll spare you by not belting out the verses through cyber space.)