nice... it would be interesting to know what you are being spared... or maybe you told us that... um.. you know what? nevermind, its good..

Ah, I wish I could say that to my parents! Good work.

I liked the end stanza, but the rest of the poem got dull because of the repetativeness. I would suggest taking that last stanza and working with that a little more. If you want to keep the original idea and feel to this piece, then go back and rework the rest of it so that you're not saying the same thing every time.

M...very insightful of ya. I like how you form this poem. Nice job!

This reminds me of something that happened today that really ** me off...good job.