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| Leina 2006-01-02 ch 1,  | abuseOh my! That was... hot! An at the same time, it was really sweet. I can understand the passion you write, and on some level, I can even relate. I love the adverbs that you used. Well, the language all together was passionate. But yes, another loverly poem of yours! Much different tone than the lats one, but I sort of like the change to a bit of a happier note ^^ Oh, and Happy New Year! =P |
| Alvina 2005-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseMan, I didn't realize that you wrote so well. Cool! |
| Tricky_Rabbit 2005-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHuh, not what I'd most expevted from you, but I'm glad you put something like this up! I really did like it. It was a really lovely poem and I hate most that don't rhyme, but I still liked this one. Why is that? -tricky |
| Z.M.d'Avari 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abusewow misty...amazing! i know u published this a while ago but...woo...blew me away! ^_^ |
| DementedOracle 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThis really is very cool. I think you captured the "moment" very well. Interesting format, too, which adds a unique twist to your style. |
| Spinel 2005-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoops... accidently commented on the wrong story... I read both poems (Moment being the first), and thought I was still on moment, so I commented! I guess it show how much I really liked your poem! ^^ Moment is very deep! Love it lots! *nods* It's too wonderfu lto decribe! XD *Glomps* Keep it up! XD |
| Timberly-Lovegood 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseso cool! =) love it =) |
| Machiavelli Du'Sarde 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAnother emotional poem, it was quite good and showed promise. It doesn't really flow though (but that might just be me). I wish my first kiss was like that. |
| phantom.o.t.o.freak 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abusewuts a fervor...? hmm, it made me all butterfly-y.:) |
| Cerii-chan 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh, I loved it! It's so true, so emotional, so detailed! It could be anybody, and somehow you know it can't. You manage to convey this person's personality so well into a short poem that I am wondering if it's your own. Keep it up! --Cerii-chan! |