Wait--does that mean that you're going to be updating OCAP or not? Or is that going to be published too?

okay, so i clicked on this story not knowing what to expect
but it is brilliant! you have such a unique voice, and for some reason as i'm reading i can't stop imagining it as a voice over narration type thing in some kick-** film
this reads better than quite a few published chick lit-esque novels i've read
so kudos to you :)

Are you dead? Are you alive? Are you ignoring this review? Are you sleeping with one eye open because there are angry readers forming a plot on your life?

Update please! Please! Please?

There were only a few grammatical errors in these 39 chapters. It's really good! UPDATE OR DIE!

Thank you, carry on.

Hey there,
i figured after reading WW the trilogy i'd better hop on over and see what else you have and I must say I was highly entertained. I love the character of Nate and i love the way you have developed your characters. I think that Sarza is still a bit of a msytery though and i simply cant wait to see what you do next. How publishing for WW going?

I like your story. But time is not a constant, just so you know. That time is not constant is the essence of Einstein's theory of relativity. Spacetime is relative...

Now THIS is what I call a great story!! Great characters and plot, witty and charming ^^

Dear Savannah,

Even though you haven't updated in over a year, any news on OCAP is more than enough to make us forgive and forget... so no hard feelings for the times we threatened to strangle you or get our pitchforks?

-Reviewer X

Dear Savannah,

Apple Pi rox my sox. They totally play D&D in their spare time. I can tell.

-Mathgeek Reviewer X

Hey there. I am a ghost writer too lazy to write my own review, so I am sending you this one. Keep up the good work!

I love this story soo much! You made all the characters so tangible and so real... it's original and I beg you to update soon!

what? That's it?!
please update soon!
I'm beginning to really enjoy this story! it's fun!

oh, that was probably the funniest chapter of the whole story!!
I was hooked on this story since last night, and I just had to review to this chapter. Amazing! And lol, Buchanan, as in Gatsby's Daisy Buchanan?

I love those Apple Pis, they are hilariously nerdy funky bunchs.
Seriously had me laughing out loud :)

I was addicted all along, but I am left wondering about Nate. I can't picture what he looks like, and what his personality really is. And does he like-like Ally or something? Good story though, update soon!

Dear Savannah,

Apple Pi rox my sox. They totally play D&D in their spare time. I can tell.

-Mathgeek Reviewer X

Hey there!! I am a ghost reader too lazy to write my own review, so I am sending you this one. Keep up the good work!