Bugger me senseless, I thought I'd reviewed it already! Anyways, I love it, I told you, it reminds me of me. Very, very good!

*huggles*M-A

Concerns the ** out of me that this came out of you, but its very good nonetheless. Knowing what I know now, I enjoy the tense changing. You're right, it does give it more of a journal entry flow. Mad love to ya, chica.

intense. You should really expand with this character, you could do a lot with it. Otherwise great job.

This is a beautiful piece of work.I kinda feel that way when cut or at least use to.Great job, and keep it up!!

I think I am about to cry. It was short, yes, but it was amazingly powerful. I knew someone who used to cut and I know the pains of contemplating bringing the blade down, closer, closer, will it hit my wrist this time? Sorry, lost on a tangent...anyways, really powerfully story. It flowed so poetically! Beautiful job!

This a really good piece of work. ^.^ You have a very creative imagination and a very good uh.. mental process? The flow of angst is *yawns and struggles to sit upright* .. great. ((Ya ever notice that the better the work, the better the reviews? Like for a really good piece of work, the reviewers will speak really intelligently like they're trying to compare themselves to the author? And for a really ** one, they don't give a damn..?)) I don't wanna say it's "exquiste" because that word makes me think of something 'light' and this is just .. dark. It's just the right color of darkness.

~Kyoibi

This was so good. Enjoyed it alot, hope you keep up the great work.