The one thing I love about this is that it rhymes AND makes sense (a skill many songwriters could use). It was very nice, in a depressing, woe-is-me kind of way... I'd kill to be able to write poetry like that. You got talent, babe (...unless you're a guy, which I suppose you could be, but I've never seen guys write poetry like that... but just in case you are, then, you got talent, DUDE.) ;D

Wow, this is wonderful! You are a great poet! (I read some of your others), the way you rhyme is very skillful indeed.

That was very moving and the way it is written really makes me feel it. Well done.

whjoa.. very good.. i love how the poem just flows.. it has a nice flow.. very good.. good job!!:)

Wow, this is gorgeous. I love it.