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| SciFiChic2007 2005-05-25 ch 1,   | Wow that was really good i can really realte to the text |
| Confused-Mind 2005-05-17 ch 1, | I have that same problem, but it is my friends who ingnore me when i have problems. Thanks for writting on this topic because it is something i needed to read so that i know i'm not alone. |
| xoxkissxofxdeathxox 2005-05-09 ch 1, | Interesting... something I can sort of relate to... Keep writing! *SSOS* |
| QueenVixta 2005-04-27 ch 1, | This is really good and very true to life. I like the but about can you even hear me screaming. In a slightly random way it reminds me of Where Will You Go by Evanescence! Nice job. QueenVixta |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-04-24 ch 1, | OMG i havent reviewed! you so need to yell at me when i dont! im so sorry and this was posted lnog ago too! ack! shame on me! now the poem, full of anger and harshnees. I LOVE IT! |
| darkmistresslae 2005-04-23 ch 1, | I can completely relate to what you're saying here. My friends at school tend to go on and on with their problems and don't even listen (or ask) about me. Yeah, thanks for writing this poem! |
| this is my love for you 2005-04-19 ch 1, | I know how this feels... how sometimes people just don't seem to care how you feel because they all get swept up in their minescule lives. But a good poem. The flow was smooth and written well. |
| chochang913 2005-04-11 ch 1, | "Can you even hear me screaming?" That line reminded me so much of "Where Will You Go" by Evanescence (I can hear you in a whisper but you can't even hear me screaming). I know, I'm a geek ^_^. Nice job balancing; slightly ** off with tinges of jealousy and wistfulness. Awesome ^_^. chochang913 |
| AllieCat101 2005-04-10 ch 1, | I used to have friends like that as well...used to being the operative word. Great poem. :) |
| Raya Dronaile 2005-04-09 ch 1, | awesome poem, and great point that you made. Keep up the good work! |
| blackoutroses 2005-04-01 ch 1, | nice twist on a subject that could come across a lot different. The starkness of this poem makes it vivid. |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-03-31 ch 1, | i hate ppl who don't care about you and only want to talk about themselves. i enjoyed this poem. simply wonderful!! SP |
| Pretty Peaceful 2005-03-28 ch 1, | hm. i can COMPLETELY relate to the MESSAGE in this. but i really think it's very blunt.its good though. really true. thanks for the review. |
| karmakaze 2005-03-27 ch 1, | This is an interesting topic as well. The one-sided friendship where you keep caring about people who don't seem to care about you. Nice work. |
| poetic abortion 2005-03-26 ch 1, | *hugs* I am so sorry I haven't review this. ;_; You can hit me over the head with a bat or spiked club. *winces at the thought* ._. XD Dam this was amazing OOR, it is so very amazing! XD *dies* X__X You say I am amazing but you are far better. (I can name like 50 authors on this site who are better poets then I. :P) God I missed your poetry so much... *hugs/glomps* Are you alright? Everything fine? Poet's block? *bangs head against wall.* -_-; XD It is so good to see you posting!! lol Fantastic poem as always, OOR. Keep it up!! !~* Noelle; I'll stop procrastinating tomorrow. .__.;V *~! |