Reviews for The Letters You'll Never Read

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Femme de Dieu 2007-02-06 ch 8,	abuseI just read all of these-- amazing, considering my strict schedule. But they just drew me in, and I couldn't stop. I think we all have a Simon somewhere in our past that haunts us like no one else could. Your ending was so completely tragic, yet so completely fitting as well. It is torturous to never know, though, isn't it? Never know what the other is thinking, or thought-- ever. I read in your bio that you are a creative writing major. How I envy you that. I love to write. You are actually one of the few people, judging by these letters, that loves to write in much the same way. Rambling, but yet with a purpose. Even in meandering, always trying to (subconsciously or not) make it interesting with either a "hurry through this," or slow "take your time" gorgeous flow. Best get myself back to "reality" for a time, and feed that ever ravenous checkbook of mine. Take care, Truly, Tourterelle
SayAnythingx 2006-11-16 ch 8,	abuseI really enjoyed reading this. I almost felt like I was reading someone's diary, which made me feel guilty. I can also relate to it as well, but now I wish I'd had the courage to send all the letters he never saw. Tasha
euphemismsforlukewarmtraged... 2005-09-13 ch 7,	abuseoh. wow. stunning...beautiful...gorgeous. (search in the dictionary for all the praises you can find...those are the words i want to give you) this reminded me so much of my 'heartbreak chronicles' only yours is infinitely more articulate. i don't think i've ever commented on yours, but i want to thank you for all your wonderful reviews. i'd add this to my favorites, but im all maxxed
nesy 2005-05-10 ch 7,	abuseWhen I came to review you back I was going to read some poetry because fiction takes too much time and I don't really have much. But I just came to this site and I read the title of this story and it attracted me, and the more I read the more I wanted to read...I fint it wonderful the way you just (sorry for the ugly word) vomit all your feelings in these letters. It's a good way to vent, and raw emotion is what makes writing really good. Truth is what makes anything good. I loved it.
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-05-09 ch 7,	abuseNice AN at the end.
Life as a Maanasa 2005-04-25 ch 6,	abusei loved it.
ecochick13 2005-04-22 ch 3,	abuseyou're not crazy. having someone jerk you around like that is never fun, and telling them is even harder because you care about them so much. hugs-lex
inferno tempest 2005-04-16 ch 1,	abusegreat like the rest!
Life as a Maanasa 2005-04-13 ch 5,	abusegreat as usual.
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-13 ch 5,	abuseWow. This is so powerful. Incredible. the big question in my mind: So what do you do now? Memories hurt almost as much as forgetting...
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-13 ch 4,	abuseI read this piece by another of my reviewers, Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style, and she had a line in it: "Sex I can do, but intimacy is my tragic flaw." Sounds kind of like this piece. It flows beautifully, your words choice and language help out the piece a great deal. Fantastic job, of course.
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-13 ch 3,	abuseYou went and did it again. "The next time I see you, I'm going to hit you so hard. Then kiss you until air is no longer a problem. I want you so bad, to hurt you and love you." How do you do that? You're amazing and very very talented. Great job.
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-13 ch 2,	abuseGreat ending line. It sums it all up. There are some slight mistakes invovling commas missing and some other really small things like that, but it was a really wonderful piece. I loved it, of course. How the hell do you put down what's in my mind? "I want to know everything you think and if I can one day do it I want to lie next to you and fall asleep to the simple rise and fall of your chest." that was the best part, because it's what I've been wishing for since I met my ex, and what I still wish for now. Thanks again! Anna
Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-13 ch 1,	abusewow. That was incredible and beautiful and amazing and so emotional and exactly what I've been going through. I'm so glad you reviewed, because now I've found this piece. Thanks so much! Anna
efp444 2005-04-08 ch 4,	abuse"I have no more words my little boy. I think it's time I looked at growing up rather than holding on." Good for you. :) I enjoyed reading these...I can feel your emotion coming through the writing. Alas, I know how you feel too...on some level anyway...gah. Boys suck. :(

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