Reviews for Coughing up nude guts

Itsa Mia 2007-04-05 ch 1,	abusewow. straight to the point. loved it actually.
McKenzie 2006-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseAgain, very beautiful. Love the way the end is just thrown in, like this is what the poem is really about, great. Peace, McKenzie
swtdreamz101 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abusehaha the thing with girls is, you tell us u luv us so much, and we'll back away, but if you leave us wondering, we'll be back for more, interesting huh? nice poem ;D
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 ch 1,	abuseAw wow such a vibrant image leading to a "bam she hates me" ending. I loved it. The whole vision was very impending. Great peice.
simpleplan13 2005-03-20 ch 1,	abusewow.. very powerful image
b-U-b-TRUE 2005-03-19 ch 1,	abuseI like the end. Somne i don tthink this pice was supposed to be taken carefully but it's actualy kinda effective.
Thyrt 2005-03-19 ch 1,	abusehm..i understand how you feel about the coughing thing...i've had this constant cough for a little more than a year and a half
softmusicnroses 2005-03-18 ch 1,	abuseNicely done! Maybe you could check out some of my works someime?