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| Skip-Bo 2006-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis is amazing. ^__^So much to be said in so few words. |
| SwitchVale 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThat's a lot of power in so few lines...really makes you stop and think. |
| ice flyer 2005-12-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Short and very meaningful. You managed to say a lot in 8 lines, and the formatting is cool too :) |
| mousedahouse 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem- the formating is truely unique, almost like a piece of art instead of writing. Thank you for reviewing my story, Kurenai. I really appreciate the your insight and contributions. I treasure each and every comment I recieve and honestly value yours. I would love it if you would continue to review any future pieces of writing that I may update with. I would especially be grateful for a review of my entire story, Kurenai, after the last chapter has been written- you've been a loyal reader and for that I would appreciate any insight or improvements I should make for future stories. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abusevery short~~ but is powerful and makes alot sense~ Great job~ keep writing! |