Very true, but you know what really sucks? I've read all of your stories. I guess I'm gonna go write on my story. Later. ^-^!

How sadly true. :(
Good work.

I like it! I know, that wasn't very grand of me, but seriously, when you can write something bitting, funny, and disrespectful at thge same time, while still having a point, you did well. This piece reminded me of a another poem by Allen Ginsberg. Good luck with the work.Isaac Hoffman

Even though this was a short poem, it has remarkable insight! Often the most intriguing of subjects are those that we simply fail to contemplate. I'll be thinking about this for quite some time! Thanks! =D

interesting... i think? anyways, it totally makes sense.

too true. i cry whenever i think of hiroshima...

and 'contradict myself' actually brenched off a song i worote a couple years back. i just decided i only liked one line of the song, a a few ideas crossed over too. I didn't know wether or not to make it a song. i decided it was far too short. if i manage to lengthen it it wil become a song.

(laughs) So true! Exactly one of the points I brought up in one of my previous debates about technology.

Succint and honest-to-the-core, almsot too frank to be true!I like the "listen-to-me-cos-the-turth-is" tone of this piece, it's a tone that's seldom heard anymore, except maybe from those still young enough to tell the truth and get away with it, and of course...from rising (better than wannabe) writers =D

Do you mean the A bomb in Japan? If you do, it did bring peae because Japan wouldn't surrender. After the bomb, they realized that they had to give up.

~*Toni*~

Short, powerful, and TRUE. Great job.

very interesting way to put this. unfortunately, very true as well. nice job. *TI*just a side note.. i liked the summary for this. it was funny.