Hmm, it doesn't seem like horror quite yet, but I hope that more is to come. Excellent start. Though I'm not one to critisize...

Wow...very scary. A demon wiped out a whole village? Wow...all I can say is wow.

Wow...I love the theme of this story, and I'm interested to know more about the daemon and the

dark, I adore all literary things that are dark. :3 now this, is really well done. not a single flaw within its depths, nothing that I can really detect in my eyes. a lovely start to something that looks as though it could be something really grand. _ I hope you continue this.

!* noelle *!

Whoa. That is so creepy, but it's in the horror section, so I can't complain. I love it! Is it a one-shot, or the prolouge for a story? I hope there's more!

There are certain powers priest have, rites of exorcism. These “arcane” powers are not their own, they come from the faith of the populace in God. Could a faithless human society fall to the devil? I plan to touch on this in my “The Last Man’s Warrior” series.

Good one. For some reason I found 'Daemionette' a bit funny. Oh well. It was good, but maybe you should drop the description of her weight, as this seems rather needless. And 'jade' should not be capitalized.

Well.

That was a bang. The story moves very rapidly, but I feel as if the characters were underdeveloped. The entire thing feels kinda rushed. That's my opinion, though.

pretty decent little story I must say. It has great description and a perfect moral. good work!

oh, dark. It's written really well, though, good job.