Reviews for Me, My Friends, and the Voice in my Head

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Itsuyaya 2008-04-10 ch 5,	abuseWierd. I'm not even going to pretend I can see where this is going 'cause honestly, my last few comments stand.
Itsuyaya 2008-04-10 ch 4,	abuseUm... Yeah, still lost. First: Who's Alexander? I'm guessing genius-boy, but I could be wrong. Second: What the hell was that about? I'm sorry and pardon my language, but I'm so lost that even with a map, I'd be lost for a year. Maybe, I cna get some answers from the next chapter. BTW, it's 12:39 here, and I'm not going to bed until I've finished this story. Yeah! And, I won't be able to think with this bugging me. Yes, I have very few exciting things to preoccupy myself with. And, I have trouble sleeping. No clue why, but I can be dead-do tired before I crawl in my bed, but the second my hand even brushes the bed. I'm awake like a five-year-old with tweleve BIG bags of candy and two dozen cups of REALLY strong coffee. I think my subconscience is punishing me for something. Hmm... ^-^!
Itsuyaya 2008-04-10 ch 3,	abuseOh-kay... I'm offically lost, but you know what the good news is? There's still another chapter!
Itsuyaya 2008-04-10 ch 2,	abuseNo, no, no. I liked it. I'm still trying to figure out where Street Girl, Paperclip Guy (Stan), and Mr. Boy Genius fit into this plot. ^-^!
Itsuyaya 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseWow! You have those voices, too? I don't have one named Negative, though. Lol. I'm kidding! ^-^! But, I do try to strike up conversations with my conscience and my imagination. Conscience doesn't like me, but Imagination thinks the world of me. Lol. I'm still joking. Okay, yeah. Seeing someone then jumping off to meet them has happened to me before. And they turned out to be following me, too. I jumped out of my seat so quickly to see who the girl was that I startled my mom. I was funny. I run straight down to the Wyre and across the bridge, but I had lost sight of her when she went around the corner of the kitchen. Oh, yeah. This was at my favorite camp ground, Dragonhills. Anyways, she must have seen me jump up and hidin the showers until I had past then went over the gulley (it's not a fuctioning part of the creek anymore). She was right behind me for a second when she accidently steped on a twig and I whirled around. I think I may have screamed a little. She's now a good friend of mine. Her name is Kayla, but because I don't care about last names usually, I still don't know her last name. Or at least, I don't remember it. Huh. Oh, well. It doesn't matter. Later! ^-^!
GryffindorsQueen 2006-01-26 ch 5,	abuseare you making Mellie's life hell for a reason or do you just enjoy it? Anyways, very entertaining... man I need a life away from fictionpress...
Celtic Dancer 2006-01-21 ch 5,	abuseI'm not exactly sure what it is, but something about this story makes me want to just keep reading and reading! The scene with the gun was a bit random, which I liked, because when you throw something in there like that, it keeps the reader on their toes, and now I'm wondering about the robber who held the gun to Mella's head. Please update soon!
Petit Poisson 2006-01-21 ch 1,	abuseI like this! The sort of melancholy part of the first half contrasts a lot with Mella's meeting Eliza, and something about this whole thing reminds me of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind for some reason. Maybe it's how eccentric Eliza seems to meI like the idea of the "Negative" always being with Mella, but a little clarification as to what exactly it is would be nice. Overall it's a fabulous start, and I appreciate your review on Mile High Tower!
The baava Project 2005-07-10 ch 5,	abuseAw, that was a good ending. I liked the visual emphasis on the mood, with the sun going down. Winter's behavior and speech really amplified how helpless Mella is feeling, as well. What a jerk. Here's to hoping you continue soon! ^_^ ~ LoK
The baava Project 2005-07-10 ch 4,	abuse^_^;; Favorite part? Accidentally firing the gun. That's what he gets for handling one in the first place! (eek) I'm curious about our green-eyed robber. Looking forward to where that might lead! ~ LoK
scizophrenic-fairy 2005-06-20 ch 5,	abuseWrite More i am hooked! lol v.good check out some of my stuff plz. I love it!
tawnyfawn 2005-05-27 ch 5,	abuseOh... The end was really well written and kind of- Oh I don't know! Forshadowing things for the future? Metaphorical? In any case, I know what I mean, and it was good. =D So well done. Eugh, and that Professor is so... annoying! I really detest it when people pretend to care about you, and act all high and mighty, and then they just brush you off completely when they get bored... It's just one of my many pet-peeves... =P Okay, sorry, gotta go... Update soon! =D from fawny
tawnyfawn 2005-05-27 ch 4,	abuseSomehow I imagine cliched lines DO seems a lot more effective when you're about to die... Just a hunch! =P Oh... and what's with the evil-robber-lasy-with-green-eyes... From now on known as ERLWGE! =P Anyway, will we find out more about her? (Sorry about that just then, I was having fun watching the questio marks appear on the screen! ^^;) And your authors note at the end... How ironic! =P Anywayu, gotta go and quickly read the next chapter before I'm booted off the cpmputer by the parentals! =S from fawny
tawnyfawn 2005-05-27 ch 3,	abuseOh my god! Cliffhanger! Much! I hope it just turns out that someone is pressing a spoon to the back of her head... Though by all accounts, it seems unlikely. Extremely, extremely unlikey... ^^; Hehe, and her impressions of the shop called Aura were very... varied? Or, you know, not. =P And I loved the description of Winniw the Pooh's honey... Gross, sticky, molten lava rubber stuff... 'Ew' is right. =P And don't worry about the short chapters... I don't have writers block, and mine are STILL always pretty short... ^^; I really need to start writing longer ones... Anyway, the usual (the usual being: your story is so excellent, update more, I want to read more) all of which I sincerely mean, so you should! =P Or I should read more?... Whatever. =P from fawny
tawnyfawn 2005-05-27 ch 2,	abuseOkay firslt, two things... 1. I love the title of this story... Way clever. I for got to say that last chapter. ^^; 2. I love your bio... I forgot to say that last chapter as well. ^^; Anyway, this chapter was so funny... Seriously, I love humour. I mean, I love romance and drama and all that jazz as well, but I think almost every genre is improved if it has a certain sense of dark humour, which this definitly does! =) I loved her insult of watebasket... Very original! =P And I also really adored the line: "Algebra is a branch of mathematics..." the teacher droned. Instinctively, I cut him out. Just really funny... I so do that ALL the time in class... Probably not the best way to learn, but whatever. So at your story is true to life! =P (Also, I thought this might be a good time to say that my revies aren't terribly constructive, and I just comment on absolutely EVER line I like in a peice... I also use too many elipses and 'emoticons'... =P) And the entire conversation with the guy sitting next to her in Maths was just- just- hilarious! You write banter so well! Some people can't do it, some try, and some just do - You definitly do! =D Okay, yes good chapter, etc etc etc... Reading on! from fawny

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