kind of hard to get for me but once u read it a couple of times, u get the message... really sad and well done, and true too

Really nicely done, yet again. You make me want to try out this form.

Ha, I had to check you out after seeing a review you layed on somebody that was chalk full of criticism (had to make sure you lived up to the requirements for a poet who makes such bold statements, lol, and you do ;P). This poem is pretty sweet. I'm not big on form poems, but villanelles are definately one of my favorites. The repition of the title throughout is a nice touch I think, and the word usage is exquisite to say the least. Keep it up.

aw, this poem has a wonderful format that helps the poem out. the repetition is awesome here- works very nicely. u are very talented.

The repetition was well-placed, so good job. The 2nd last stanza was my favourite, for some odd reason I myself don't know. Keep on writing!

aah hope oyu werent ignored as a child poor sod, this peom is brialt an di like the feeling of gueines in it and also how you include an awful lot of various amounts of inteisnty icnluded in here well done grim

This is sad but the overall poetry of it is good. The echoes of the same lines which come together at the end work well.Thankyou for your very thorough review of my sonnet, I really appreciate it, because I knew it still needed work but I needed some help. I will look into it. Also, I value your opinion as you're a creative writing student and I'm sure you can help me a lot! So thankyou very much!

this is so sad but true, really liked the way you wrote it too.

i can't relate, but its well written adn good repition

Its a really great poem. The rhyming was real good. To think there were so many words that rhyme with child that match a poem like this O_o. Anyways... it's a shame that some parents don't care much. Anyways, nice.

good poem, i'm with shadowpharoh. i got sum more poems up and if you go through my profile i also write on goat-bunnie inc.

-Tha G.0.D.

I really like the repetative and rhyming scheme of this poem. Well Done.

sad, but a good descriptive poem.the St Patrick info you can find on google. The same general info. you find on every site about St. Patrick. It is interesting isn't it? That guy was really dedicated. Inspirational. Thanks for the review.

yes parents do miss the best moments. great poem, grim-dreamer.

SP