hey i love this MORE SOON and please hurry i hate how u gave a cliffy! MORE SOON!

He tries to entice his father?!?!?! Ew..

It's a good beginning. I never really understood atheist(don't think i spelled that right).

What?! This hasn't been updated since last year?! Terrible. The story itself is interesting, I like the idea of "the gift", it's fairly original. Yeah, so you definitely need to update this so I have something to read while you're working on (or not)Broken Wings and Crimson Halo.

Hey, long time no see I swear! I hope you got my e-mial that I e-mailed you. And this, good job. I loved it! It was an update so...no complaints...oh well. Great work! Hope you update more soon!

Harlequin~Please fix me...

lol I'm suprised you updated this one! I didn't think you were going to XD! haha

Just started reading this story today and I totally love it. *Squeals* I hope there's more to come.

Okay, so I read this story because it was the shortest one, and I wanted to get a sense of your writing. JUDGES? ... Expectant pause... I loved it! I'll try to read the remaining chapters, and possibly some other stories by you. I dunno though, I'm lazy, and your stories sure are long... I'll think about it. Anyway, good story so far, I look forward to reading the rest.

you said sumpin about a radio in my alarm clock poem. read the reviews

nice story. i told you id get around to it! i guess your not that much of a bad influence it's just i don't write such long reviews on anyone else. xlucky it wasn't Noel's dad who walked in on them kissing! though would have been interesting to know the reaction, maybe you could write another chapter?loved the bit in chapter 2 with the whole what do you where in bed thing. it made me laugh.im not atually religios or anything, i don't believe in god. i prefer to have an open mind, and it's amazing what the world looks like when you don't go to church every day and read the bilble before you go to bed. z.but hey im not gonna stop anyone who want's to believe from believing, i mean there's not really any proof or anything so knowone's right or wrong.anyway enough from me. thanks for reviewing my poem, you really could see how i wanted poeple to see it, you even explained about parts id never even knew id written!lol.

luv celentia x

Is Noel's dad a mind reader? Yay Noel for rebelling against Religious Man! Shouldn't that be "having them in a pool around his ankles"? How was he totured? What's "the Gift"? Is Cadence gay, or his adoptive father? Man, Noel's dad neds to CHILL OUT! Why sexily? Does he want to make his dad gay? Those wafers ARE disgusting! Good chapter, this is a great story!

Yo Gaki, what's up? Nice job with the first paragraph, very good with descriptions. Is Noel's dad in a cult? He sounds like a meanie, Noel's dad. Noel's parents remind me of the mom in the movie "Carrie", except they'll proabably not get stabbed to death by physic powers. This is VERY interesting, I SHALL READ ON! By the way, is GotinksX Mike?

XD I love my religion, I don't have to worry about any of this stuff thats going on! But the thought of two really hot churchy(?) boys makin' out 'n stuff is rather...yummy.

Morbid Maxwell- "When life gives you lemons, read them!" ~my yaoi theory

...I like alter boys and Priests in training...and if the Priest is young and hot, then he may sleep with other hot young boys (alter boys preferably!) I love Cadence for his innocence, but Noel is my absolute favie!

Morbid Maxwell- "When life gives you lemons, read them!" ~my yaoi theory

Mm...alter boys... XD What am I saying?! I don't even go to church! I don't even believe in God (at least not some peoples...) but hot alter boys are...hot!

Morbid Maxwell- "When life gives you lemons, read them!" ~my yaoi theory