Great job! On this I really liked it.

I love this two part poem so much!! I'm like living proof of the last line in the second part 'but the tamed animals are the most dangerous'. my moms always had me live a sheltered life and now ppl at my school are nervous around me. This is such good poetry. The second part completes the first part so well too. Keep writting!Darkest Angels

I thought you were talking about me for a second there!! Then I remember the summary. another awesome emotive write.

-Helena Lintu

i loved the first one but the second one didnt seem to catch me as much... keep writing

This reminds me of my dad...it was short but to the point, and very well written.

I love the way you write...an dthis was awesome...now I'm going to go read the first part. :)

Wow. Impressive. Nice job here. ~Karma Chameleon

This. Is. The. Best. Ever. I want to steal it! Not really. I'm not evil.