Wow, that's BEAUTIFUL, in a very sad way.

oh wow, this is so true, and very good!(I'm going to see if I can get though all of your stuff! lol)

-Helena Lintu (and thanks for reviewing, they make me happy!)

i really like this piece. it would probably flow better as a poem but its fine like this. u are really talented and this is very deep and meaningful. at least to me. its going under my favorites. keep writing.

~*sweet dreamz*~

Hi! It is I! Anyways I really like this because I just like the way you write and the way you make hidden meanings come out in your story... Anyways umm... 56 pages! She's a rebel! Hehe... Okay so um... My stories are okay! I'm going to stop writing now... Do do derf.

This sould probably be in the poems section. Just a thought.

--gangster-dolly