ooh, like it!

I'm in love with the rhyme scheme here... amazing!

You create a very vivid picture with your words. Baised just on this poem, I could create a beautiful painting, and now, have the urge to do so...exept I'm on spring break and my parents wont let me have paint in the house I...tend to go overboard and paint...everything...lol...but, nethertheless, beautiful poem.

Alice

I totally agree with the other reviewers. This is sexy. Very nice.

beautiful descriptions

ooh...that is sexy ^_^U

Damn girl. I want to MEET this man. lol. All you need is an apostrophe in "devils". I love this poem. It is so sexy.

I am curious.

What inspired you? *grins*