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Taintless 2005-03-19 . chapter 1
Never fall in love; because you do just that, fall, and it hurts like hell. Trust me on this one. It may seem nice at the time but it ends up hellish. Your heart ends up being ripped from your chest and left to rot on the dirty ground, too far from you to recover. People tell you it's best to move on, but when you've already given so much up, it's nearly impossible to move on, no matter how hard you try. No matter how many other people you look at or how many people ask you out, you just can't move on, you feel as if there's still a chance that the one you once loved will come back to you, that all of the pain you're feeling will actually have a purpose and that it'll all be better. You hang onto that hope that they'll love you again like they did, even though they've found someone new. Even though you know in your mind they never really loved you.

That paragraph is so true and, just because it hit so close to home, I know you're going to be a great writer. I'm willing to see how far this goes! Good luck! Please update!
Close Your Eyes and Dream 2005-03-19 . chapter 1
sounds like a great story!
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