| Reviews for Moving On |
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deletion 3/25/05 . chapter 1very moving in a wayit gives power off of a few simple words that hits our hearts... |
Bri Evvans 3/21/05 . chapter 1 Beautiful. Perfict use of mechanics. This is what poetry is all about. |
this is britt 3/20/05 . chapter 1very powerful and sad. I like your pen name, by the way. thanks for the review! |
arcane devices 3/20/05 . chapter 1this was very heartfelt and I hope your friend will eventually "move on". -ADD |
simpleplan13 3/19/05 . chapter 1wow... very sad and awesome |
Emily Parker 3/19/05 . chapter 1That's good. Very descriptive, and tear-jerking. And I'm sorry about your friends loss. This is very good. |