|Reviews for Moving On|
| deletion 3/25/05 . chapter 1
very moving in a wayit gives power off of a few simple words that hits our hearts...
| Bri Evvans 3/21/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Perfict use of mechanics. This is what poetry is all about.
| this is britt 3/20/05 . chapter 1
very powerful and sad. I like your pen name, by the way. thanks for the review!
| arcane devices 3/20/05 . chapter 1
this was very heartfelt and I hope your friend will eventually "move on". -ADD
| simpleplan13 3/19/05 . chapter 1
wow... very sad and awesome
| Emily Parker 3/19/05 . chapter 1
That's good. Very descriptive, and tear-jerking. And I'm sorry about your friends loss. This is very good.