whoa...that rocks. have you tried putting music with it? that would make a really awesome song. that rocks

Absolutely great poem! I definitely like the style of your writing and how the rhyming doesn't sound forced. As for the topic, I think women [in his case] shouldn't try to change their partner or think they can. If you fall in love with someone, it's because you love who they are now, not who they could be.

Again, very nicely done, I really enjoyed reading this! :)

that was really good! I could hear that playing in my head. But great job, and great message overall! :)