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| the naked civil servant 2005-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseoh... i really really like this. what is it with tangerines? they are inspiring."her tangerine facechambered and brusingreflects tease-peeled pieces of puddled fleshsectionedand dripping with time" |
| Amrun 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI really love this poem. The imagery is so beautiful, and I can feel the sad detachment in the words. under the moon, she appears only as a nympth, a fairy It's "nymph," not "nympth." Just thought I'd say that. :] |
| ancient trees 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseaww, it's so sad and gorgeous. 'hopelessly stuck, uneven together' (love) |
| beti213 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abusethe imagery here is really great... the last line is a bit confusing, although that's probably a joke between you or something (I just caught myself mentioning things only I understand in a poem... it was rather pathetic) anyway, I like it a lot :) |
| The Random Witness 2005-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWOW! YOU MUST HAVE HEARD THIS SO MANY TIMES BUT IVE GOT TO SAY TOO, THAT YOUR POEMS ARE ALL SO POWERFUL AND HEARETFELT! the imagery is amazing and the style unique! Be proud coz this is great! ~TRW |
| catseyeview 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuselike it! |
| lifescrewsusall 2005-03-25 ch 1, | abusei like your poems because they are different from what i usually read on fiction press. they are complex and descriptive but still personal. "and the boy that fared her well a long time ago, before there was a heaven or a hell he had hair like midnight his skin was wallpaper white but she isn't doing well herself, not quite"it's real poetry & i like it :)-Aaron |
| Escapist 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuse-My favorite by you. Ever. I'm kicking something out of my favorite stories to add this. |
| crazy dog events 2005-03-22 ch 1, | abusein a way this poem reminds me alot about me. It's nice when i come across sometihng i can relate to. Alot of things on fictionpress are either crap or beautiful, and never can i find a happy medium of relation. |
| Joewhatever 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuse*claps* Very nice, I like it. I really dig the title too, I don't know why, but I just do. |
| stutter something profound 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuse[he had hair like midnight his skin was wallpaper white] i loved the whole thing, obviously, but those lines really stood out to me. i also liked how you used the word 'mismangled'. i really liked this. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and such a sweet tale. I loved the way it was woven in the poem. I hope your friend enjoyed the poem you wrote for her. It was beautiful. The imagery was just...wow. Beautiful. Good piece. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abusegreat descriptions and it flows together well and its just beautiful again and everything. keep writing :D |
| shola 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseFunny. That sounds an awful lot like a friend of mine, just from his perspective, not mine. Interesting.Really great descriptions and again comparisons in your own inimitable style. quality |
| asyousaid 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseAs always, beautiful! Need I say more? Each line is a masterpiece. |