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| NauticalAcronym 2005-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseSorry if this is confusing :( Basically it is about how a girl who is very different and see's things very differently, in the end that is taken away from her and made "normal" so to speak. She doesn't see anything as being wrong and I guess what I was aiming for was the potential that people have, but becuase people misunderstand them they are assimilated as best they can be or segregated.My teacher said that the ending was a little confusing, I apologize :P |
| Houseki 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseWonderful job. I really love it. You did an excellent job with this idea. If I tried to write with this plot I'd screw it up. Heh. Anyway, this is definately going on the favorites list. Elsie reminds me somewhat of myself when I get into one of my philosophy moods late at night. The sane Elsie, not the "cured" Elsie. I despise insane asylums. I can understand putting people that may hurt themselves or others there, but just because someone sees reality differently is no reason to lock them up. I should probably stop here before I start rambling again. Anywho, 'tis a wonderful story. I'm glad I decided to check out the horror section today! |
| han 2005-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat the hell is this story about?its really confusing. |