This was a truly amazing story: suspenceful, emotional and action-packed - a roller-coaster ride on paper (well, a computer screen, but that's not important). Loved how real Jason thought, loved the beginning, middle, end - everything. I didn't scour for errors, but reading it aloud in my mind (if that makes any sense) I only caught one: in the paragraph starting with 'The last remaining gunman' and the sentence with 'It then hit him that perhaps he did not know he was wounded', I think you omitted 'know' (it reads: 'It then hit him that perhaps he did not he was wounded').
Other than that, a masterpiece that you should definitely publish.

I just got done reading this, it was extremely well written. The ending alone told more of the story which was good, kept guessing all the way to the end.

The first story I read really on this site and I have to say this is truely a great story.