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cami611 2008-11-15 . chapter 1
I understand the content of this poem and being a female myself certainly agree with the stereotype and hate it myself. However, I can't find any real literary content that helps to express this message in full. The words speak plainly enough for themselves, but there is little to this poem beyond the words, at least as far as I can see. My favorite teacher used to tell me that when it came to poetry "form reflects content" you have a clear content, if you want a stronger message let the form show your message as well. I love the idea behind this poem, and hopefully the ones to come in the future. Keep this going and I'm sure that you will improve over time. This is a great first start and as I said the content is very strong you simply need to work on your form. ~Cami611
Riseile 2007-05-17 . chapter 1
AMEN to that!
I am a good driver, a pervert, and I like spike TV.
AND I am female.
Snyffles 2005-12-03 . chapter 1
Wow... you know, I agree with abso-freaking-lutely everything in there. Very nicely done! Ten out of ten!!
Drazuki 2005-03-20 . chapter 1
You rawk.

And it ain't just because you're female.
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