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Reviews For: Blood, War, and Tears
Adonia Chesser 2005-03-21 . chapter 2
Hey, you did good this time to, I'm glad you made the editing on the priveous chapter.
Adonia Chesser 2005-03-20 . chapter 1
It ok, but whats with the Jedi at the end?
TheAngelofhope 2005-03-20 . chapter 1
Not bad so far. It could turn out to great in the end. Keep it up.
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