This poem was excellent as well, I hope this isnt a true poem

Great descriptions...though the imagry prejected is nothing big...lovely job. excellent topic as well...:)

Sounds like my family... beautiful poem though.

First off, thanks so much for reviewing my poems (although my existance nowadays on fictionpress is like nil - fanfiction has sucked away my soul!!)~!

Ok, enough of that. Wow. This was a great poem - the emotions running through are just impossible to ignore! Also liked how the ending went into a circle (except for the last word -- "here" -> great emphasis on that, by the way. I went up and checked the beginning and it said "there" so that was a nice comparison and shows the transition going on in the poem). Oh, and usually I don't like poems that rhyme - actually I tend to avoid them like the plague - but in this poem I hardly noticed them until about halfway down (and even then it was subtle so that was good).

Nice work!

Yoo-jin

Wow, this is so awesome! I can relate, and I love the words you used. They really show the feelings of pain, and it's very powerful. I also love the irony of the title, everyone thinks faery tales are happy but sometimes they are not. Wonderful job :)

wow...this poem is just...wow. usuallywhen people think of a fairy tale , they think of happiness, but u've totally thought deeper than that. way to go! This poem rocks.

That was really powerful. I didn't really get the rhyming, some places it seemed to and others it didn't. But this poem is really moving. I loved it.

Such a tragic peice. The poem flows well, is written beautifully and the words fit well. ^-^ I am in awe at this, no matter how many times I read this. (two at this moment.) I continuely feel the same way after reading it. The poem is sad, relatable and tragic. ;^; Beautifully done!! Continue the good work!! :P

!~* Noelle *~!