 Showstopper (too lazy to sign in) 2005-12-21 . chapter 16 Hey man. Nice chapter here. I like how it was basically all action, which makes sense considering the state of the world. Seemed like this one was highlighted Ranger a lot. Keep up the good work and have a good day. Off topic, I won't be working on any new stuff until the new year. |
 Showstopper 2005-05-27 . chapter 7Nice chapter with the battles between Nira and Obo along with Stereo/Comeback. I don't know if you know this but Comeback's weapons coming back reminded me of the now deceased DC comics villain Captain Boomerang. And I really enjoyed the breakout sequence with Martha in the beginning. Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter. Nice tagline for the big event in the RSU although I think you'll have your end of it up before I get to my part. Then again I might be able to work on it faster since I've gotten my writing jones back. |
 Showstopper (too lazy to sign in) 2005-05-01 . chapter 6 Good work as always, Mr. Deli was a fun villain and our mysterious ring girl is breaking Donovan out. I like the prison guards too, especially the one who can't accept that the security is being bypassed. Looking forward to the next chapter. Have a good day, :) |
 Showstopper (too lazy to sign in) 2005-04-27 . chapter 5 Nice showcase chapter for Nira here. She earned her new weapon and I kind of like the Cunningham's. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :) |
 Showstopper (too lazy to sign in) 2005-04-22 . chapter 4 Liked this chapter, especially the tests the various groups had to take and how Nira won. Martha's an interesting character. I like mysterious characters in well just about anything so I approve. Looking forward to the next chapter. |