deffinatly a good poem >_

I really, really like this. I wish I'd written it T_T I like that 'blood is thicker than water, but the haze of darkness beats them both' part. You should write more dark stuff.

This poem is oh! so true and greatly put. Keep writing...

"Blood is thicker than waterBut the haze of darkness beats both andChases the heart into a dark corner, tortures itShaping it to dark purposes"Great lines

Poetically Yours,

Brennan Rosser