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| Devil's Footprint 2005-04-09 ch 1,  | abuseYet another great poem, of course. I relate to this one very, very much, if I've read the right meanings. Yet again it would be wrong to say I enjoyed it, but I sort of...can't find the right words... |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abuseLove the referance to Pandora's box. Brava. |
| Escapist 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI always stumble over my thoughts when it comes to your poetry. The imagery is enough to make my mind explode. you starve me in the desert and expect me to smile when you're near i am a nervous wreck shivering at the bottom of the sea And my absolute favorite: held in my young hands and i am a -->crashing bore |
| Momentary Sins 2005-03-22 ch 1, | abuseyou seem like you've found happiness and it's store-bought so well put-together so well thought-out but then it kicks you in and ends up ** you out. it's wonderful, i love it! one of your best. i absolutely love it. |
| shola 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI really like the way this one started out in an honest, soulbaring manner, picked up galloping momentum and then collapsed into exhausted apathy.She really hurt you huh?My sympathies |
| The Melissa Occult 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's a nice piece with some interesting thought and very nice metaphors, but I must say, some of us live on colder and darker planets... drifting mindlessly through space... with nobody in sight... to the part of space where you cannot even see the stars to dream or the sun in hopes of maybe one ray or two. yes, there are colder and darker things in this world beside an ancient roman god. he is old and dust hangs in streams from his lips. There are planets out there that move once every few thousand years, and throw the others from alignment, for this they are destined to exist forever on the outskirts of reality, in darkness, in pain, but they all suffer together. sorry for the long pointless review, the real part is the very beginning the rest is me ranting. |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abusegreat poem! SP |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on this. Enjoyed it alot. I hope you keep up the good work. :) |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abusewow nothing i say could do this justice. this is perfect really and it's being favorited. keep writing :D |