Wow, this poem is just so... perfect. It really gives me something to think on. Your style of writing is something that I envy. Amazingly done!

I loved this. The style of writing is superb. I hope I have room on my favourites. Well done, keep on.

this is gorgeous. your word choice is stunning.

the formatting adds so much to this. you're a great, great writer. and how true is it, this poem.

Beautiful

I love this. The words you have chosen are absolutely perfect. I love how much the enjambment plays a role, letting each line simply hang. The end of each stanza-like thing is simply an open statement. So perfect. I love some of the words in this. "earthyspice", "cosmeticless" and "shamefullyless". I applaud!

nice words. ur style is changing a bit. i am very depressed. check out my site...now.

oh my god, i love this so much, i can't even explain it.

i love natural beauty, but sometimes i feel like the odd ugly girl, having a middle-eastern/european background while all my friends are either blond or very fair-skinned... you really showed beauty here, a different kind of beauty, and i loved every word. i really am kinda tired of westernized beauty, and this was like fresh air.

really, every word was beauty itself. fav for sure. :)

I like some of your expressions such as "poignant breeze", but i'm lost at some points, perhaps because you appear to have taken the poetic license too far: "shamefullyless"? and "herneck"??=P