the last line made me smile... so true, so true. the imagery here is good without going into the realm of the bizarre (it's hard to describe tongue-kissing prettily) this is well done.

WOW! I adore this! I've personally attempted many a times to write a poem about kisses...but never to the extent you have...bravo! *claps*...I like alot! and the ending...so appropriate, you know your kisses babe...keep it up.~Captain~