 Yasmina 2005-07-14 . chapter 1you're too trigging triangular to be normal. and you'd need a major stepstool to be seen over the crowd. but enough making fun of you. totally awesome poem. despite what all the english teachers say about you, you can actually write. so much for not making fun of you. haha thanks for reviewing my stuff. you are awesome. |
 Charna 2005-03-24 . chapter 1How often do you change your pen name, sheesh.
Nonconformity kicks **! Lol, but you are a wacko even if you do conform. But it was a good poem, I guess. The bars were annoying but then again so is the editting program they have on fictionpress now. |
 mrs. kyo sohma 2005-03-20 . chapter 1 hehe...good poem!u smell!and so do traffic lights!and my opinion counts as more cuz i am a real person :P unlike kyo. so there!haha..i should have reviewed wen erica was here, but it probably wasnt up yet. o well. for some reason it says u have 3 reviews, but only 1 showed up wen i clicked it. its all screwed up ^-^and the message from pippin is to go throw urself in a fire and burn becuz a duck died! |
 cantb3p3rf3ct 2005-03-20 . chapter 1i really liked that. it is so true. everyone seems to try to fit in and be the same. but no one who does that is being true to themselves, to who they really are. nice work. |
 Covin 2005-03-20 . chapter 1 The summary makes this out to be just another stereotypical, boring, "Be yourself" kind of poem...BUT, the first stanza blows me away. "so that I no longer fit in my skin, would you accept me?" You definitely had an original approach to the typical topic, so kudos. (When formatting your stuff, tinker with Shift+Enter) |
 darkaura de shadow 2005-03-20 . chapter 1YES! we are not just ppl in a crowd,and infact we are real and not afraid to be ourselvs...like everyone else!l love this poem! its so empowering,keepwriting! |