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| Wilwarindel 2005-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseI don't think I've ever read a poem quite like this; in structure and theme. Beautiful and intriguing. Very nice! |
| SexyGreenFrog 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really liked that poem. It was obvious that it meant something to you, and it made the poem good, because you could feel it's importance. To be saved, and to save... We all need to be saved from one thing or another, and sometimes we save people even when we don't realize it. The poem was beautiful. Great job. |
| PleureD'Amour 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuseTo be saved or to be the savior? I'd want to be neither. I spread my wings all the time. Yet once in a while, they clip them off. I'm left in the dark, drowing in my own blood. Is it possible for some thing to never fly? |