   spike-is-so-hot 2005-06-17 . chapter 1This is an absolutely amazing poem, I like love it really, it's so good. |
 Stifled Scar 2005-05-05 . chapter 1i can really relate to that poem, good job! |
 Shadow Link 2005-03-21 . chapter 1Good flow and great ryhme scheme. I like the mood you set, too. What's the inspiration for this one?
-Shadow Link |
 Crazy-Word-Painter 2005-03-21 . chapter 1 Wow... good rhyming! And I loved the title/last line. Very strong emotions. Good work, keep writing, and thanks for the review! :D |
 AmaranthineMisery 2005-03-21 . chapter 1love it... especialy the last 2 lines... keep writing |
 Opium Hex 2005-03-20 . chapter 1Yes ! Can relate well to this ! good work. |
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