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AnnaG.Luv 2008-08-04 ch 1,	abusei was skeptical about reading something that's written in the fashion of a screenplay but after reading several reviews i had to give it a try. And let me tell you, I wasn't disappointed. I think something about the detachment from what's going on gives the story itself more of a creepy feeling.
Momiji K. Sohma 2008-06-06 ch 9,	abuseWe need to get this made, You need to copyright this and send it to some people! This is literally epic. It made me Cry so hard, I swear you need to send this so someone big, anyone.
neurotic ca 2008-05-03 ch 1,	abuseI was a bit wary when I first glanced at the structure of this story, because so many online screenplays are extremely bad and immature, and this..this is great. It feels like it could be a real horror movie, a good one in fact, and it slightly reminds me of Danny Boyle's 28 Days Later only way more nihilistic. Bravo! 28 Days Later is one of my favorite movies of any genre. Plus, you actually helped me drop nihilism into an actual conversation.
Green Eyed Pixie 2008-04-15 ch 9,	abusedear lord that was immense! it was so beautifully written (or horrifically as the genre would have it) and the character development was amazing to see. i liked how the character's pasts were not mentioned, apart from the odd glimpse of Clive's which i found insightful, and how their realness was eminent. I loved the very sad ending since i felt it fitted, and the close relationship with 'Ghost' and Clive was touching. i hope you writer more stories =]
i-see-faeries 2008-04-02 ch 9,	abuseWow, just wow. I stayed up late reading this. I think it's going to give me nightmares, and now I'm scared of zombies in my house. But you know, so worth it. I read this in hopes of romance, but I'm glad there isn't any. It would ruin this story. But it's so sad. I feel sorry for Clive though. He's pretty much literally the last man on earth. And that's such a bad feeling. And I'm not sure what to make of the ending. I hate how it doesn't tell anything, but I realize that there isn't any other way you can end this without ruining the splendor of the story. So great job, I love it.
firedraygon97 2008-01-18 ch 9,	abuseThat's cold, Clive. Wow, he really changes by the end of this. I like him much better than the freaked out kid at the beginning. Fantastic work with this. ~fd97
Wonderland Reject 2007-07-16 ch 9,	abuseWow. Just...Wow. That was amazing! I am in awe of your writing skills. I don't know how to describe how incredible this story is. You were able to show exactly what was happening, you developed the characters, and came up with an amazing storyline. This is truely inspiring work. I know you have one more story, so I'm going to go read that now. I have no doubt that it will be incredible as well, even if it's not packed with zombies.
e-rabbit 2007-06-30 ch 9, anon.	abuse...uhmm...on basis of this script alone...kinda in love w/you. Seriously. I don't even read scripts on the internet anymore cause the format gets annoying, but this one just hooked me. Great job! You had the explosive gore, violence and profanity that any good zombie movie needs, and then you went and threw in characters that I actually got attached to (of course, than you killed them off, but hey, that's another zombie staple). So yeah. You rock and keep up the good work!!
J. A. Rowan 2007-04-18 ch 9,	abuse**. THat was CRAZY! I can still... feel it. It's like... haunting me. Damn. You're amazing. That was unbelievable. I have NEVER read something like that before. It was... insane. Ohmy god. I'm soo much on edge right now. Its so odd. I even cried, i mean, that was so depressing but at the same time so damn amazing that i'm still in shock from the ending. God, i can't believe Ghost died. IT was written so well. Your plot was AMAZINGLY GOOD! So good. Man. You rock so much. That was just... unbelievably good. Thanks so much for the read.
Gekkou 2007-04-17 ch 9,	abuseOMG! I ** love this story! Clive is my hero! Sorry for all the exclamation points! lol. Seriously, this story was amazing, I was so enthralled that I forgot to go to class. >.< I have trouble finding good zombie stories, but this one definitely topped my list.
Lady E 2007-01-21 ch 9,	abuseWhat. the. hell. I needed ten minutes to calm down after reading this, and I still feel like crap, without the faintest idea what the rest of this review is going to say. An aptly-named story first off. "In stark contrast to Jill’s meticulous preciseness, Ghost just indiscriminately blasts the ** away with his 12 inch barrel. (His shotgun, sickies)" - Like a puppet, I was waltzed right into that and keeled over in the inevitable wracking sobs. Pity that couldn't be inserted into the film itself. "GHOST Avril. Wait." - That set me off too. You have a very unpredictable, almost gruesome sense of humor. To write something like this to this effect takes one hell of an imagination. And really, bravo. I was glued. And literally sitting at the edge of my seat the whole ride, unfortunately for my bladder. I skipped writing three papers in favor of this, but it was well worth it. I can't remember whatever else it was I meant to say. Against my saner judgments, I am favoriting.
Lady E 2007-01-21 ch 4,	abuseLord Almighty. This is freakin' -good-. Not the quality of stuff you usually expect to find on this site. The subtlety and realism (in context of course) you work into this is amazing. Especially that monologue Clive decided to give before blowing the brains out of that misfortunate zombie-girl. That of all things really put their situation into perspective, for me at least. Couple other things: You really like "large expressive eyes," don't you? "he climbs desperately out of the ditch and RUNS FOR HIS LIFE." - Like in Promise, the side-commentary, the tone, works hilariously. I feel like I'm not only watching shots from a quick-paced horror film here but also getting the nutty, worded narration on the side, the best of both worlds. And if that isn't sheer flattery, I don't know what is. I reread that " and brits" comment at least five times over and cackled each and every time. Nicely put.
bansira 2006-10-08 ch 9,	abuseOH.MY.GOD...! This was so great! I can't stand zombies and such but this story was amazing and you write so well! Loved it x3
super happy nuclear girl 2006-08-29 ch 9,	abuseDamn. I just wrote out a really nice review for you and my computer decided to die on me. Anyway, I love this! I don't read many horrors because I am a wuss, and you're story (or script) was proof enough for me to be more cautious before falling head first into a zombie story with the word 'violent' in the summary. I love how chilling and sinister this is, and how creeped out I was home alone after reading. I love Ghost and I like how you manage to give us believable, diverse characters without dipping into their pasts. I enjoyed it a lot! Well done.
lilylupin7 2006-08-04 ch 9,	abuseO you can't just leave it like this. Please please please update. I was never a fan of resident evil, but I think you just made me like it. Please continue with a sequel (maybe where Ghost is still alive and non-zombieish)

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