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| paledaisy78 2005-05-30 ch 5,  | abuseOMG! they get to be in the play together...this should be very interesting. |
| FlyingShadow09 2005-05-22 ch 5, | abuseo...I love this chapter as much as I've loved the last four! please don't hesistate to quickly update! |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-05-20 ch 5, | abuseOh my, now I can't wait to see if Chuck is a great singer or not. V_V |
| Esquirella 2005-05-20 ch 5, | abuseI missed this story! Where've ya been? BYW, great chapter! |
| FlyingShadow09 2005-05-14 ch 4, | abusewe...I love this too...keep up the good work and update ASAP! |
| paledaisy78 2005-04-23 ch 4, | abusethis chapter was good. new character, yay! it shall be interesting to learn about why he left Holland... |
| Esquirella 2005-04-18 ch 4, | abuseSo is Campbell going to be interested in Chuck or Rick? The chapter wasn't bad at all. Every chapter used to intro a new character seems awkward but only to the author. The reader needs the information on the new character. |
| Erin P 2005-04-18 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is shaping up to be really interesting - looking forward to reading more :D |
| paledaisy78 2005-03-31 ch 3, | abuseI have an odd feeling that Chuck will end up being the other gay guy in the play and then Campbell and "Charles" will be lovers. hehehe. i like ur story, its always interesting to watch a straight person slowly realize tht they're gay. *evil laugh* update soon please!! |
| bambi4real 2005-03-30 ch 3, anon. | abusegreat chpt but i don't feel the tension between chuck and campbell yet. I guess this is the build up |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI love it and I can't wait for more. Please update soon! |
| Esquirella 2005-03-29 ch 3, | abuseWhere have you been? I missed you! I would have never known English wasn't your primary language. You don't make many grammar errors, and none that we all haven't made before. This is another great set up chapter. I'm sensing Chuck is intrigued already. Cool! |
| MooseDeEvita 2005-03-29 ch 3, | abusecan't wait for karaoke! |
| MooseDeEvita 2005-03-24 ch 2, | abusewow, is it really just that he's a good actor that this is happening? Guess I'll have to wait, won't I |
| bambi4real 2005-03-24 ch 2, anon. | abusegood job. i'm excited to see what happens next. i wonder...will he fall in love with henry for real? :) |