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Reviews For: She's Just a Simple Girl

ViperM1
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI like this poem. It seems to be very true. I especially like the imagery of "She’s just a little girl curled up in the corner of a teardrop". Just remember, God will never leave you nor forsake you. And you can always call me too :)
Tyanna
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abusethis is rather sad.

I like your writing style, your description and word choice is very good.

I can't really find anything wrong with it. :)

good job :)
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