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| ViperM1 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem. It seems to be very true. I especially like the imagery of "She’s just a little girl curled up in the corner of a teardrop". Just remember, God will never leave you nor forsake you. And you can always call me too :) |
| Tyanna 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abusethis is rather sad. I like your writing style, your description and word choice is very good. I can't really find anything wrong with it. :) good job :) |